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//Communication// Very good introduction which involves the audience, good transitions between speakers. Some speakers were a little nervous and relied on learning their text by heart, but in general you were quite easy to understand and interesting.

//Slides// You slides look good and contain the right information for your presentation - not exactly the same things you say, but just what the audience needs.

//Content// A good attempt to generate debate through concrete examples and advice.

Slide 1 (Alexander) You sound quite spontaneous, good introduction to topic and speakers, good involvement of audience

we expose you > we are going to show you

Slide 5 (Maxim) Rather hesitant, you sound as though you are reading or have learned your text by heart

detrimental pictures > damaging pictures spouse (should sound like mouse, house) fired (the vowel is like hi/high) found (the vowel is like cow or how) finally (the vowel is like hi/high) some people can't spend a day > stress CAN'T otherwise we understand CAN

Slide 7 (Julien) Too quiet and hesitant - you need to speak more loudly and smoothly. Perhaps this is just a question of practice, because your comprehension in class seems good.

it appears to be stay here for a while > it is here to stay datas > data the privacy > _ privacy change a small part of users > a small proportion of users each and every information > any and all information to be careful of > to be careful about

Slide 9 (Sarah) Good delivery, volume, but a little hesitant and some learning by heart.

forbid (second vowel is short like ship) if you pay attention, some of your friends won't > even if you pay proFESsional this solutions > these solutions